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Thursday 31 October 2019

Year 10 English l Persuasive writing #1

Cats make better pets than dogs: Against

Good things about dogs:
  • They never want to leave you 
  • They like attention
  • The give you exercise by going on walks with them 
  • They are playful
  • They are always happy to see you 
  • They will protect you 
  • They will make you happy 
 Bad things about cats:

  • They bring in dead animals
  • They don't care whether your around or not
  • They leave the house a lot
  • Cats would eat you if you were smaller than them
My 3 strongest ideas: 
  1. Dogs care about you and will do whatever they can to protect you from any dangers that could come, they are always happy to see you and they love your company.
  2. Dogs also give you and themselves exercise when you go for walks with them and when you're playing with dogs, running around with them or swimming with them.
  3. This kind of combines the other 2, dogs are also good with keeping your mood up, dogs are pretty good at making people happy with their playful mood, they get hyper whenever you come home from work or school, and most of all, they are just happy to see you in general and they will hang around you a lot to give you company.

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